Impossible Plans Comments

It's impossible to write the appropriate words about such a beautiful poem. You describe inseparable love- it's impossible to separate two souls who are united In the strongest bond of life. It's one of the best love poem I ever read. Every word, every line is outstanding. Thanks for sharing.

Cont.2) though the child has stepped into adulthood, the pearl must be used to be traded, the moon, when it is no full moon, its beaming becomes weaker, the tree from its leaves, the leaves will meet the next stage of existence.....you see? I have enjoyed this ardent poem, brilliantly written! God´s Blessings!

Truest facts here created, an amazing poem I have read here, dear poetess! I cite here s few lines from your poem: How can you detach a tree from its leaves! Moon and its beams! Pearl and the Oyster! A Child and the Mother! ................IF I may say....when the time is ripe for it, A tree, Moon, Pearl and Child. BUT the ties that bind will STAY, ............. please see cont. Thank you.

I liked what I read, well done dear poet. ...because love is not because xyz, but despite it all.