Monday, September 29, 2014

Impossible Past Comments

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It was 76', when you vacationed on Mars
Rented the family a cottage near Bradbury Mounds
A modern concrete Lloyd Wright framed into the bedrock
Overlooking the green Sea of cylindrical calm We had an L shaped pool that wound around the ocean
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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Fantasy might become fact, a powerful desire is transmitted to the descendants and fulfilled many years after. A nice poem.

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Ramesh Rai 04 October 2014

Imagination is the backbone of a poem. imagination is greater than any knowledge and degree. every knowledge evolves from imagination. you have imagined it may be possible. A great write. full marks.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 October 2014

I remembered this moment very special reading this poem like the feeling of hand of God. Beautifully written poem.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 October 2014

A beautiful dream, fantastic imagery, I could imagine myself being there, swimming in those lovely waters. Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for you comment on my poem: Corridors of Mindless Sacrifice. I definitely appreciate your input. RoseAnn

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