Thursday, November 26, 2009

Impossible Beauty. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dance of the planets drift into view
Arrayed with colours of differing hue.

Swaying with elegance moving with grace,
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Fay Slimm
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Eyan Desir 04 December 2009

It's too sad man is busy destroying the earth.. cutting trees and other harmful stuff When her beauty it gone...The fools will try to save her But it will be to late...Man's greed will cause us all destruction Well Written....10ss

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Ann Beard 27 November 2009

tenderly expressed and well written also totally true, a very appropriate warning. Kind regards Ann

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David Harris 26 November 2009

Fay, you are so right with this wonderful piece that warns us of what we might well become if don't stem the tide of our own destruction. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Carol Gall 26 November 2009

lovely fay a solar flare is fantastic warning heeded 10

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Daniel Kempson 26 November 2009

Fasy can only agree with Ian lovely piece of verse and take heed indeed 10 Daniel

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Ian Bowen 26 November 2009

Fay, well written with such an easy flow about it. Your warning at the end is one we should all take notice of.10/10 Regards, Ian

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