Imploration Comments

I read this 1 to Darita she was amazed by the thy words u put down.. She is so proud of ur poetry she love them all like I do...

Keep the faith & Believeth in our Lord and He will keep u writing more impressed poetry My friend..

Well put words my friend.. Its amazing how u can put words in2 a poem like this.. Many more best wishes & prayers u keep on writing more poems.. :)

Excusite! ! ! it seems like a melody of life...full of true feelings and long lasting impressions.every word has its own beauty I am spell bound ranadeb you have such a beautiful and amazing thoughts...May Allah gives you more power to write such a wonderful piece like that stay blessed..

Stunnig write, captivating with such beautiful imagery, thank you for sharing

An offering of a temple of words, rich in imagery and colour, a search for simplicity. When the verification code allows will comment privately. Keep writing it is part of your journey.

nice dedication well tried thank

good write, thanks, I like it.