Sunday, February 17, 2013

Imploding Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twisted reasons
internally turn
into the logic
that imperils my thoughts,
...
Read full text

Captain Cur
COMMENTS
Frank James Davis 19 February 2013

Perceptive. Especially appreciated the lines: ...in words that tend/ to worship themselves... Worthwhile offering!

0 0 Reply
Lyn Paul 19 February 2013

Very well written. Particularly like the twisted reason.

0 0 Reply
Joseph Anderson 18 February 2013

Hi Capt..-This happens to me all the time.A great exposing of how our thoughts and ideas implode, even as we are working with them. Great to see you are still at at

0 0 Reply
Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 February 2013

a nice one Captain. we captains like to create unique works, and our great ones like you dear captain, always makes the best. fantastic write! Well done young Ellias.

1 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 17 February 2013

this also is a clever creation, isn't it?

0 0 Reply
Captain Cur

Captain Cur

England
Close
Error Success