Implode Comments

Have never thought of an implode of a heart, what a strong image! ! And the reason, slow motion of an unpleasant tongue? ! .. Wow! You my dear are a genius! ! Strong poem, if I was any good at, I would have tried to paint it. Thank you for share my friend, you do deserve much more than a poor ten.

So nicely written..you portraited a life here in this 4 lines, a pure emotion of a great heart...wonderful poetry...