Thursday, June 19, 2008

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What do we call this feeling
pure happiness and sincere?
Floating away like a cloud
moving away from the crowd
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Michael Gale 14 January 2009

Great poem! God bless all poets-MJG.

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Tango 07 September 2008

Love is like the tide, it ebbs, and flows. We must nurture it like a seed, and tend it as it grows. An excellent poem. Tango.

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Patrick McFarland 03 August 2008

I think you capture a moment perfectly. The moment that infatuation becomes love with all it's pleasure and pain and yes, reality. Well done Joan.

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Chris Vanbrusselen 17 July 2008

DEAR JOAN.I THINK YOU ARE JUST LIKE ME.PROBLEMS WITH LOVE.AGAIN? ? ? ALWAYS LOVE?

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Ivor Hogg 08 July 2008

reality has a habit of pouring coldwater on our dreams

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Michael Shaffer 06 July 2008

I love this. I can see your heart pouring onto the page. Pure passion and emotion.

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Tia Maria 29 June 2008

Ok.. I am reading through all your feelings and understanding like you cannot believe.... good, get it all out :)

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