Thursday, January 26, 2023

Impermanence Comments

Rating: 5.0

No seed that's on the earth ground
It's tree now, offering the shadow
And life of sound
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Richard Wlodarski 28 January 2023

Vivid imagery and profound words on the passing of time. Beautiful, my friend.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

Superb! Life's transience is a reality that is both bitter and sweet. Bravo!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 January 2023

Beautiful imagery there Mahtab

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 January 2023

Winter dew on the glossy green leaves Shining rising sun evaporates minutely Some are anytime rest in peace

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