Wednesday, May 13, 2020

Imperialism Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dark clouds imposed
Their way through the sunny skies
Seized lovely azure
Showing their mighty power
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Suresh Kumar Ek 08 September 2020

mighty powers are always a threat to humanity

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Suresh Kumar Ek 06 September 2020

imperialism, a threat to humanity

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Soran M. H 11 August 2020

Seized lovely azure Showing their mighty power A threat to humanity. ............... that is what they do, the Devil power

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Soran M. H 11 August 2020

short and sharp, deep and simple it deserves 10+ and into my treasure chest too Excellent

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Soran M. H 11 August 2020

this amazing imagery from the nature can have another meaning in the poetry laboratory, indeed that is what the great poets do always, but hopefully the cloud is pass quick and the sun will shine again on our planet, with it is justice lights

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Shaun Cronick 03 June 2020

A superb poem filled with dark energy and lined with a threat. Loved it! This can be mirrored in the times we all live in. 10++ and added to my favs. And thank you Rose Marie.

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Kevin Patrick 23 May 2020

The cloud of imperialism has loomed over the world for hundreds of years, from the empires that never rest until they made the world a mess, it changes all the time but its force is still felt. Great metaphor, and comparisons of clouds with imperial might. Sadly clouds are what give us the storms we need.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2020

Showing their mighty power! ! Only to suppress others. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2020

The night that slaves the children of light truly endangers those who will be saved....10++

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Anjandev Roy 14 May 2020

Seized lovely azure.....brilliant......thanks. anjandev roy.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2020

Seized lovely azure Showing their mighty power A threat to humanity. symbolically presented....... the real imperialism. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 May 2020

Imperialist! Raven now in golden scarf flying through the reddish cloud now the sun setting down in the east by commanding mortal Almighty

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Kostas Lagos 14 May 2020

Excellent idea Rose Marie!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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