Friday, May 6, 2011

Imperfection From The Daughters Point Of View Comments

Rating: 4.5

I lay here and ask myself 'Am I really that bad? '
while the tears flood my face, i slowly cry myself to sleep
your words hurt so bad, they cut so deep
i know i'm not the ideal daughter, but i didn't know i needed to be perfected.
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Taunya Benns 14 May 2011

Brings about sadness, the voice, the words, the need to reach what is not available...Touching! Thank you for sharing this! Taunya Benns

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Sabrina Robinson 06 May 2011

I like your poem because it is your true feelings. I am not a poet but I like to read poetry and sometimes listen to it. Keep on writing and tapping into who you are and what your life is all about. I wish you the best and maybe someday your relationship with your mother will get better and grow to where you believe it should be. God bless you!

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