Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Imperfect Perfect Man Ii (How The Story Ends) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just how many times does a love affair ends?
It looks like a 'Burton - Liz Taylor' all over again
Though you have never given me diamonds or baubles or gifts of any kind
All you wanted to give me was your measurement as a man
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June FeirCruz
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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 November 2008

excellent exposition reeks on the otherside of love, eloquence flows by the poignance, yet painful when stucks up in dark grime, excellent write by imagery,10++, thanks for sharing

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J.D. Carter 12 October 2008

very interesting how things start off so good and turn out so bad. Just ending a relationship now as we speak (or as I read this) . Once again...very nice job/

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Interesting. Very nice. I love it! Peace out, Lexi Baby.

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