Thursday, November 26, 2009

Imperfect Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The singer sings a song
About the time he was a boy
Those times have been over for a while
The singer has grown too old
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Robbie Squires
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 November 2009

a very mature write..liked it all through

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Kassiah Gervaise 27 November 2009

beautiful, wow, i can only hope i'll ever do work thats even close to this good.you have a gift take good care of it i have read alot of poets in my young life and you stand out from them all...just beautiful.

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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