Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Imperfect As You Are Comments

Rating: 4.5

I had once memories
Of being in your arms
Sweet nothings you had whispered
Too tame I had become
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Raven Keller
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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

Wow! The imagery is amazing, I can feel your pain at being used by another. Very strong expression, you are a strong person with an aching heart. My heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing something so painful. Keep writing, I want to read more of your poetry. RoseAnn

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Holly Heron 02 December 2006

i love it's beautiful

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kskdnj sajn 22 November 2006

Fifteen? I enjoyed the theme in this Raven. Good work.

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