Impending Doom Comments

Should i give up on you? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

(cont.) GLOOMY IS AS GLOOMY DOES When gloomy is how your day starts out, simply open your windows and boldly shout: I'm not takin' it anymore! Let me correct the score. Mr. Day, GIVE me sunshine and puffy white clouds. Don't, with gloom wrap me in funeral shrouds! ! I'm not ready to end my life like that! No Siree! I swear to not give into gloom; I'm too mature. Get out of my way, Gloom. Happy I'll be! ! ! ...bri :) [now, SMILE! ]

i detect notes of despair and fear. am i correct/right? to MyPoemList (the gloomy-poems one) . i like how you 'mixed up' your rhyme scheme(s) ! ! nice. let me know if you get into a funk. maybe i can help? ! (cont.) ...

When we see a gloomy sky the clouds always lift to show the way.+++10 Robert

A good start with a nice poem, Rainbow. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.