Impending Darkness - Haiku Comments

In classical haikus, the last line should explode itself and stand out uniquely, but at the same time should hug the first two lines gracefully. A great example is this piece

The sweep of a storm can be magnificent!

A powerful, dramatic and lovely haiku. I enjoyed it a lot.

what a lovely image you created and placed in my mind---excellent writing, my friend--top marks of course

Very impressive and inspiring....especially the lone sparrow...lovely write

Congratulations once again. Today this magnificent Haiku is ranked #14 on the Best Member poems. btw, have you seen my poem "Message of Peace 02"?

I am able to visualize the lone sparrow caught amidst your imaginative words. Nice expression

A beautiful composition, you are a master of the haiku, without doubt one of the best! . Superb stuff

Outstanding, fighting battle all alone.

But at the same time is painful that it sweeps away little helpless lonely sparrows. To my poem list

A big congratulations dear poetess. This haiku is not only a storm wave that sweep away dark clouds, but at the same time

: TWO: This is not just a simple Haiku, but it is thought out by the great Poetess and its meaning has become greatest! TOP Score for this thoughtful Haiku.

A powerful worded Haiku and so loveliest rendered. My thoughts go with the lone sparrow, so very sad to know this fact in nature, an excellent Haiku says more than a thousand words.

Wonderful haiku.....thank u, dear poetess.

Beautiful sadness that brought tears to my eyes

Excellently painted and expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

Yikes May God be with the sparrow! .. Very deep heart moving imagery! ..

Congratulations, Rose Marie. Today this magnificent Haiku is judged as Rank # 25 in the list of Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter.

Lovely haiku. Nature spurs the imagination in so many ways to direct our hearts ever so gently.

If I didn't do any better, I'd swear that there's a haiku competition happening on PH. And you're definitely a finalist with this brilliant haiku, Rose Marie. Thoroughly enjoyed every word of every line.