Wednesday, June 22, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

She has this look that puzzles the heart,
Her mildness drives sensational heat through the spine,
She breaks through my defenses like through a park of card with the brilliant smiles on her face; she is so intriguing, so charming and so pretty.

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Moses Rotimi
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 29 February 2012

Nice poem....mr lover boy...keep it up. Keep writing. Charley Charms

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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Moses Rotimi

Moses Rotimi

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