Saturday, December 30, 2006

Impasse Comments

Rating: 4.8

It would not be a violation of my will
If You were to take me now.
Just consume me; end this
Constant struggle to be
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R.S. Farris
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Brian Dorn 14 March 2007

Nice 'choice' of words throughout... very well done! Brian

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Jonzo Bandwagoner 01 January 2007

Wonderful, wonderful job of capturing this personal, intense struggle between yourself and God-very truthful and self-revealing. Keep up the great work!

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R.S. Farris

R.S. Farris

Memphis, Tennesee
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