Immutable Comments

Good one, Patti. deep reflection on self and others.

Yes, Patti Masterman, but we have to keep our songs as melodious as possible, so our fellow travelers may enjoy our company by saying that we are brilliant, perfect and sometimes they give us 10 marks as I do! !

this is my new favorite out of what i've read of u so far. i can't say i'm surprised because your like f-in magnificent. and u give it away for free! your an inspiration

Brilliant poem Patti, very well written and rhymed. Guess we are all in a tunnel of our own making and from which we long to escape.

My kind of poem, I love this whole thing of time space and what we really are, and if time travel is already alive and well, (so to speak) A really fantastic poem.