Immutability Comments

' Although things change they stay the same' I loved the way you played with rhythm in this poem. Wonderful job!

Ivor, spoken like a true pessimist. Which you're decidely not, so I take it as an exercise in mitigating perspective. The poem works well because you keep it under tight rythmic control, repeating lines as echoes to substantiate the message. Well done. Rgds, Ivan

I do believe that the title has definitely changed here Ivor. Or am I seeing double? Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Sometimes I think this is true. Other times I don't. Either way I love your attitude and expression here. t x