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feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem. 10+++

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem.

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, shouting, laughing, crying, quarreling, asking when I needed anything missing- A common man's needs so well portrayed. Thanks for this lovely poem shared. 10+++

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, shouting, laughing, crying, quarreling, asking when I needed anything missing- A common man's needs so well portrayed. Thanks for this lovely poem shared.

a life of a common man, feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem. 10+++

a life of a common man, feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem.

Beautiful poem I liked the underlying philosophy.. thanks for sharing

but instead lived a life of a common man, feeling happy and sad, feeling hunger and thirst, ........free life. and the joys of leading a free life... there is a sense of beauty in being ordinary... an easy feeling of being. who you are at heart...... love your special ways of expression. thank you dear poet. tony