Immunity: 04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Immunity: 04

Rating: 5.0


Again I repeat,

and speak to you

in public

I did not commit

a crime

by making me

different

from highly rated,

highly publicized,

highly talked of

people like

a Kasab,

a Ram Rahim,

a Sarathi,

an Asharam,

but instead lived

a life

of a common man,

feeling hunger and thirst,

feeling happy and sad,

did many things ordinary,

shouting, laughing,

crying, quarreling,

asking when I needed

anything missing-



Am I immune to the

Laws of this Land?

Monday, December 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition,injustice,social behaviour,social injustice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 December 2017

but instead lived a life of a common man, feeling happy and sad, feeling hunger and thirst, ........free life. and the joys of leading a free life... there is a sense of beauty in being ordinary... an easy feeling of being. who you are at heart...... love your special ways of expression. thank you dear poet. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

Beautiful poem I liked the underlying philosophy.. thanks for sharing

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

a life of a common man, feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 February 2018

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem. 10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 26 February 2018

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, shouting, laughing, crying, quarreling, asking when I needed anything missing- A common man's needs so well portrayed. Thanks for this lovely poem shared. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 February 2018

feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, shouting, laughing, crying, quarreling, asking when I needed anything missing- A common man's needs so well portrayed. Thanks for this lovely poem shared.

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Prativa Rani 26 February 2018

a life of a common man, feeling hunger and thirst, feeling happy and sad, did many things ordinary, A nice writing portrays the life of a common man asking so few things, yet they are denied. Lovely poem. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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