Thursday, March 12, 2009

Immortals Comments

Rating: 4.3

To understand the logic of greatness,
we need to be inexplicably illogical,
Neither by the artistic brilliance, never,
Nor by the philantropic demeanour,
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Vaibhav Pandey
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Yelena M. 05 April 2009

A very profound creation which is deeply imprinted in my mind...lasting somewhere beyond space. Thanks for this poem at the verge of time seeking immortality. Best wishes. A.

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Hari Khabrani 24 March 2009

Dear Vaibhav, it appears that you were once History student and yore you speak with the past glory. It is the age of nuke. But history never dies for particulars. History reminder is in the poem. Good work..

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Marilyn Lott 19 March 2009

Some people do seem larger than life and truly immortal. I consider Mother Theresa one of those special people. Nice poem, Vaibhav! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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LOVEFOOL Aka 19 March 2009

Good write, as plenty to say 10+

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

Powerful thought-provoking piece Vaibhav. Made me think! Mark

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Tyease Collins 17 March 2009

I just love the way it's written overall it's so strong but the poem is excellent -Tyease

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Barry A. Lanier 17 March 2009

excellent portrayal of the cognition of surrealism and it's proper place in history, , , to entertain, , ,

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Sandra Martyres 16 March 2009

Greatness is measured differently at each time and age....very meaningful poem 10

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Kesav Easwaran 16 March 2009

yes; comparisons are illogic...every greatness is crowned with a uniqueness of its own...good piece...meaningful...10

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Tom Golding 15 March 2009

Well stated. We cannot judge present standards by past ideas of greatness.

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Randy Hogan 15 March 2009

Well writing and lovely.....10+++

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 15 March 2009

Dear Vaibhav, Brilliance or Greatness may always be debatable since hardly we find someone following the same path again.Present would have been different perhaps, if we have followed the gospels properly. The use of matephors are unique. You are doing well at your age. Best of luck.--Rajkumar 9

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Alison Cassidy 15 March 2009

The irony of your last line rounds off this fine poem with aplomb. I like too, the paradox you describe. Mystery and paradox are the twin pedestals upon which wisdom sits. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Shekhar Joshi 14 March 2009

beautiful and forcing words you say so much with so limited words great work

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Akram Saqib 14 March 2009

'Exactness of their excellence, debatable.'........ great words like those of classic thinkers well done

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Bob Blackwell 14 March 2009

Its from the great teachers of the world that we learn wisdom, from warriors we learn only to fight for what is good. Well written Panday.

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Sadiqullah Khan 14 March 2009

Greatness is not power.I have seen very humble people but they are great. Very well written Pandey 10

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Meggie Gultiano 14 March 2009

a nicely written words of wisdom..The sentence construction is wonderful.I do love this. thanks for sharing hugs, Mam Meggie

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 March 2009

The legends never die. These legends of the past continue to live in our lives with new perspective and names but the context remains same, its immortal. Best Wishes Naseer

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Pablo Cruise 13 March 2009

Bold strokes, Vaibhav. SO much to say in such a young mind.

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