Immortals Comments

A very profound creation which is deeply imprinted in my mind...lasting somewhere beyond space. Thanks for this poem at the verge of time seeking immortality. Best wishes. A.

Dear Vaibhav, it appears that you were once History student and yore you speak with the past glory. It is the age of nuke. But history never dies for particulars. History reminder is in the poem. Good work..

Some people do seem larger than life and truly immortal. I consider Mother Theresa one of those special people. Nice poem, Vaibhav! Best Wishes, Marilyn

Good write, as plenty to say 10+

Powerful thought-provoking piece Vaibhav. Made me think! Mark

I just love the way it's written overall it's so strong but the poem is excellent -Tyease

excellent portrayal of the cognition of surrealism and it's proper place in history, , , to entertain, , ,

Greatness is measured differently at each time and age....very meaningful poem 10

yes; comparisons are illogic...every greatness is crowned with a uniqueness of its own...good piece...meaningful...10

Well stated. We cannot judge present standards by past ideas of greatness.

Well writing and lovely.....10+++

Dear Vaibhav, Brilliance or Greatness may always be debatable since hardly we find someone following the same path again.Present would have been different perhaps, if we have followed the gospels properly. The use of matephors are unique. You are doing well at your age. Best of luck.--Rajkumar 9

The irony of your last line rounds off this fine poem with aplomb. I like too, the paradox you describe. Mystery and paradox are the twin pedestals upon which wisdom sits. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

beautiful and forcing words you say so much with so limited words great work

'Exactness of their excellence, debatable.'........ great words like those of classic thinkers well done

Its from the great teachers of the world that we learn wisdom, from warriors we learn only to fight for what is good. Well written Panday.

Greatness is not power.I have seen very humble people but they are great. Very well written Pandey 10

a nicely written words of wisdom..The sentence construction is wonderful.I do love this. thanks for sharing hugs, Mam Meggie

The legends never die. These legends of the past continue to live in our lives with new perspective and names but the context remains same, its immortal. Best Wishes Naseer

Bold strokes, Vaibhav. SO much to say in such a young mind.