...Immortalize Men Comments

this poem has a power to inspire people... really beautiful and interesting... yet i was truly intregued by the title and the way you mentioned the title at the last.... very impressive... i liked it infact loved it...10+++

Immortality is a power to hold with greatness and humility under the viel of divinity...fabulous piece.10+++

Human being existence is only a blow in the cosmic eternity.

A great diversion from a long day.

10+ great good luck

ahh this poem is well made my friend. i think its wonderful

yes, we immortalize good memories, especially of our loved ones. i think you're very loving and passionate. feels good to read something like this. keep it up.: -)

eyan, good write, i like the idea of immotal man but for sure immortalization comes from God. Keep up the good work I liked it very much.

Yeah, very effective words....moral boost for every person who feel down and out..thank you very much for inviting me Love Dr....quite a psychaitrist I shud say 10++

In all, it is, all to be decided still...iip

i loved it that how o feel that was deep can you do the same for my poems thx

Overflowing feelings from heart and mind. Literally perfect and strong write.

Only great people think great, speak and do great things in the world and their works only immortalise them in the heart of future generations in the world! Men like lion-hearted Richards as more or less depicted in your poem will surely remain immortal in the world!

hey Eyan.. strong revolutaionary stuff there been looking at CHE G's pic lately but very nice and potent lines...convet the message loud an clear you acn be proud of this piece...its a tenner cheers

every body wants to be immortal not by world standards but by their own..each one's conscience speaks nothing else but that

That was good i liked the comparisons

why you describing me man. what i tell you about that camera? ? lol. nice work

you did it again beautiful work..

amazing as always, you truly are a fantastic poet! ! ! ! !

an ode to effort and persistence great lines also a spur for the man within thanx cheers