! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***immortality Of Shadow ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***immortality Of Shadow ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
as rays shattered bespeckle to shadow of dusts
illuminating love in the wings of angel`s heart
lips of maiden touching eyes intone in darkness
i have listened soul whispering autumn`s breeze
desire covers dainty silence enshrining passion
i could behold the sonata rejuvenating by glow
rhythm of seeing resurrects slowly by her pain
holiness entreat upon to emulate the lost song
spumes of whiteness beg upon blue for endearment
grave of heaven ascends to immortality by gleams
waves of ocean seem to surge covertly with hued moon
dream inebriates to drink more cup of gleams eluded
heart longs to float on Elysian bay further deep
lest storm may not trespass into luscious myth
fence when haze less in the sorrow of benevolence
as sparckle of love needs no armament to defend
yet wholeness burns brilliant with no distinction
overpowering time and space accorded upon assent
flame enlightens guileless of soul from sorrow serenaded
as glimpse of unison assails slowly grave of lone voice
Beautiful poetry. Competent using great metaphors. Whole very well broken down. Very good and beautiful poem. I read with a great pleasure. Thank you., for the sharing. Greetings. Take care. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
Dr. Kar: Very well penned with deep thought. Enjoyed the read and will read more of your poetry as time permits. Please read my poem On the Road To Golgotha. Your friend Lynn
excuse me... r u in love? ? :) only a loveful heart can create sth like this. bravo10/10
Really I respect your reading habit which reflects in your writing. Your word-strength, craftsmanship in dribbling with the thoughts and feeling is marvellous. thank you poet run long.
heart longs to float on Elysian bay further deep wonderful symbolistic poem 10++++++++++
Your depth of thinking is unfathomable.The connotation of every word chosen is very appropriate for the situation described. I was much fascinated by your nature-basedpoems.Your romantic poems are also fantastic.Whatever seen, in your poems 'love' is not expressed in its obvious form but is attired beautifully in metaphors relating nature only. To my understanding, the poem is about the state of mind when love has matured but the heart still longs for achieving further euphoria.Towards end, completeness overpowers time and space constraints. One/two days back when first time I read this poem I voted ten before insertion of comments.
It sounds like when the light departs from the body, the shadow remains. A vivid elegant display of words, beautifully penned.
In so many nice poetic words this immortality of shadow poem is well written,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/11/2025 12:18:18 PM # 1.0.0
wow! this is the best! but if only the shadow lost its immortality....