Sunday, May 19, 2019

Immortality Of Men Comments

Rating: 4.3

While in this bed but coffin called
Which to all must be fulfilled
As life and death are at war
The mysteries are still concealed
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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2020

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 November 2020

But if, if I die by chance Because someday I know I will Play this music for men to dance Death is fake and life is real a very good poem

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 June 2020

Taking life in it's stride and living life meaningfully without bothering about time of exit. A well deserved poem of the day. Congrats.

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Ruta Mohapatra 03 June 2020

Life and death are at war......so true! Congrats on poem of day!

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Savita Tyagi 03 June 2020

Beautiful poem. So much fear of death has been instilled that we often lose our rationality about valuing life live in love and unity.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 June 2020

I will surely prove to you all That men only go to sleep awhile To rise and fall and rise when we fall Such is nature's imperfect wiles ........superbly expressed on the birth to die and die to rebirth; beautiful philosophic writing on immortality.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 June 2020

Death is fake and life is real......the great truth! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem on life and death being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 June 2019

Celebration of death and it's necessities beautifully brought to the fore. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2019

But if, if I die by chance Because someday I know I will Play this music for men to dance Death is fake and life is real....so touching and true. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulatons for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2019

" Death is fake and life is real" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 June 2019

Play this music for men to dance Death is fake and life is real I wish you rewrite this after seeing a DEAD RAT HE HAS A SOUL AND HEART LIKE HUMAN MONKEYS CAME LATER O POET STUDY LAWS OF HEREDITY WE COME NOT AGAIN THAT IS NO MYSTERY MAN SCULPTURED ONLY TO PROMOTE RELIGIOUS THOUGHTS

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Julia Luber 03 June 2019

Strong traditional poem about immortality- sweet classicism...

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 June 2019

'o be not afraid of death my friend Embrace it with your heart For death is surely not the end It marks another life to start' Yeah, death is just a change. There is life after death. It is just the soul shedding old garbs. A nice poem indeed. Congrats.

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Ramesh T A 03 June 2019

We fall only to rise again! Death marks another life to start again indeed!

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Ramesh T A 03 June 2020

Egyptian Paroahs are still sleeping to have a long life again like immortality as they believe! Congrats to the Poet for the selection of his poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!

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Savita Tyagi 03 June 2019

Death is fake and life is real.......belief in rebirth often takes the fear of death away. Life is all about our beliefs. We create beliefs to make peace with unknown.

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Prabir Gayen 03 June 2019

I'll live engulfed from my mortal body Which lie to rot slowly away It is certain for everybody Just let the fool have it's way... beautiful.. Congratulation

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 June 2019

A magnificent poem of the day, Adams. Congrats for being picked......................10+++++++++++++++

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