Thursday, January 27, 2022

Immortality In Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

No pigeon in my hand cage as wheat eater
It's far away now except the white feather
Eat; eat but assorting good one for the health
She tells it as the emblem of peace to be wealth
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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BRITTE NINAD 13 February 2022

beautiful imaginable loving poem penned

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Moore Noore 08 February 2022

superb and imaginative poem penned. I think your pigeon is didactic figure in this poem. I appreciate your thoght

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Sultan Deen 07 February 2022

Really that'a metaphorica poem penned by you. So thoughtful and thought ariser. I love it

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 28 January 2022

A thoughtful poem Mahtab, Welcome back.5****

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 January 2022

An excellent poem in abstract metaphor and deep muse. Kudos! Plz do read and comment on my newsest poem too titled, 'The ravishing rain'

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