Saturday, September 12, 2015

Immortality Comments

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If I engrave your name
On the stony wall of grayish ancient cave
Darkness will wrap those dearest letters
With the cape of nihility…
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Sanjukta Nag
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David Wood 12 September 2015

Lovely poetry. I think all poems are immortal...... Good ink

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T Rajan Evol 12 September 2015

Melodious poetry..........delight to read.

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Rajnish Manga 12 September 2015

Thanks for such an amazing poem. Three stanzas unfold three different denouements and a philosophy. The beauty of the poem also lies in the melody and sweetness of its words. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2015

Awesome poetry. Left me Speechlessssssssssss with your words.... But, if I write your name In the midst of my crimson love poems Fondness will embrace those dearest letters With the cloak of immortality… 100**********

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Sanjukta Nag

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