Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Immortality Comments

Rating: 4.5

It stole all my gifts
My soul, my passion, my love
Now everything is lower than the sea
So lower than should be, it is lower than me
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Jasmine Williams
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Khairul Ahsan 09 April 2014

It's a good poem, liked it. 'I bleed the sadness like a willow tree I scream, I scream, I scream' - Touchy! 'The passion from my life has died Fiery hatred is born I can feel the contempt arise While, my holiness is scorned' - Good expression!

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Chuy Amante 09 April 2014

Wow! Thanks was powerful!

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