Immortality Comments

Love it. The thought of living forever, Watching all your loved ones pass. Take a look at my new poem called, Spirits of the dead.

Very interesting poetry. You offer an interesting concept here. I like this piece.

Wow, it's a great poem in my sense..(envy to mortals for death is untouchable&live to hope for caress death) wonderful lines but I must say that from the first to last line it's amazing... Add meanings to the title..

Wow, it's a great poem in my sense..(envy to mortals for death is untouchable&live to hope for caress death) wonderful lines but I must say that from the first to last line it's amazing... Add meaning to the title..