Saturday, April 5, 2008

Immortality Comments

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He rode planes;
Traipsing across the heavens
Dancing invisible waltzes with
Angelic dolphins.
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wardha jawdat
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

When a writer as great as this puts pen to paper, the trees rejoice. For the know they shall not die in vain. A 10. GW62

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Wardha I hope you are doin' fine-indeed an alarming absence Anxious rehan

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The world of everchanging vistas Of dreamy cottoncandy characters Where every face wore a smile And every sunbeam a wish fulfilled It is truly an immortalizing breath of life Best- rehan

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Chan Jee 06 April 2008

Hi, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , jawdat Wardha you have deep emotions.you have also broad vision.i appreciate you. please read my poems also and give your true remarks thanks bye

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