Immortality Comments

this slight body with its transparent wings and life-span of one human day still craved its particular share of sweetness, a century later. immortality and the sharing sweetness of a dream like attitude., tony

every thing has its purpose and time will not stop it

Brilliant poem. A descriptive assessment of the situation.

wow, people! notice how this poem which begins with reference to a fairy tale, to something of lesser consequence, ends with a profound note and a surprise. -glen kappy

Thanks for sharing++++++++++++++++

Made me look at that God again and Again! thank you for sharing! ! ! 10+++! ! !

One human day! Thanks for shsring this poem with us.

Starts like a fairytale and ends on a disturbing but honest epiphany....another great poem by the poet.

In the best of these poems, something dangerous, disturbing, hovers beneath the words - this is not surprising when you reflect on her life & background. This quality helps to give the poems just enough complexity and potential contradiction to make them beautiful.

Another sublime poem! I hope to read all of your. Wonderful!