Immortality Comments
The more you try to reveal it, the bigger life's mystery is.
In the golden sarcophagus, many a sovereign found his eternal home,
Those who wanted to become immortal while they lived.
The greater the tomb, the closer you are the immortality, was their motto.
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Amazing work, rich and deep lines to meditate upon. Thank you for sharing
Only the soul is immortal while others perish.A nice thought provoking poem on life and death.
Life's mystery! ! ! ! There are more questions than answers! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The more you try to reveal it, the bigger life's mystery is Keeping their hunger in their soul. Only the soul is eternal... there were so many quotes in your poem which i could pick up and present again and again. loved your philosophy, your simplicity, your nobility...... thank u. tony
Fascinating poem on Immortality. few good examples to read here. This is a dashing theme and well worded in a fantastic write. I have enjoyed this a very lot. Good examples to be read. Immortality, a delicate subject to comprehend deeper. Thank you for sharing.
Profound and thought provoking poem, We all try to leave our impact in one or the other way but this world is going to perish one day. All our exercise is for futile achievements called Immortality. You nailed it with your thoughtful poem, thanks for inviting me to read this poem. Stay Blessed.
Indeed soul is immortal and not and never the decaying bodies! Thanks for sharing this poem of yours here, my friend!
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10/20/2025 5:52:46 PM # 1.0.0
Very profound thoughts. Mysteries of life are never fully revealed.More we learn more we get amazed.