Saturday, July 15, 2017

Immortality Comments

Rating: 4.9

A most tender verse, beautifully worded,
if human has survived the mortal rituals

and would possibly go over quietly to infinity,
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sylvia. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2017

Human soul always enjoys immortality in life. Soul travels to God's immortal residence. Mortal rituals are performed while a soul is inside body. Life's verse is definitely very tender. Beautifully penned poem is shared is very tender to a reader.....10

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Elena Sandu 20 July 2017

Dear Pipi I am so glad to see you are writing again, how true you speak! Indeed, if we could await that future with greatest love, patience and nurture. All we need is not to fear the infinity, not an easy thing for many of us.

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Thank, thank you so much, you have understood this poem, thank you so much, dearest poetess ElenaS! I am sure, YOU won´t fear INFINITY ever, you have done and undergone the heaviest task already in YOUR LIFE, I KNOW that, love you much dear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2017

This is nice to see that you are active again in PH.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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