Immortal Wounds Comments
Make no mistake, my dear, to pardon all my sins.
Never once had you doubted me, nor distrusted my integrity.
I bid you. Lend an ear for I have not forgotten thee.
Even when my bones are pressed to dust. Never shall I forget
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Wow, very moving and well done! A fantastic example of your artistic ability, but in the line '...thus my a sorrowful ordeal' do you mean '... thus a sorowful ordeal' or '...thus my sorowful ordeal'? That was the only grammar error I didn't understand, but nicely worded otherwise!
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10/31/2025 4:48:55 AM # 1.0.0
This is amazing, you are a truly gifted writer. It reminds me of shakespeare, that's how good it is!