HALT-listen when I speak
fear me, trust me
place your life in my hands
honor me, respect me
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That is a very good poem, there are many ways the readers can take this poem because it goes into many depths. Very good read, can definitly relate to it. Keep on writing.
I like this alot enemies fear a soldier, civilians trust honor respect, fellow soldiers salute. I like it. I don't understand the immortal concept. But like the last person who commented said, this poem can be interpreted in many different ways.