Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Immortal Love. Comments

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I once knew a boy,
Claimed he was sentimental,
Said his mind and body functioned on a higher level,
Than those who're just concerned with sexual desire,
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Derrick Andrews
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Lu-Lu Martin 02 April 2009

Very descriptive.. latter part of the poem very haunting. Great effort!

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