Immortal Love Comments

Your 'Immortal Love' already seems immortal to me! Very well written! The whispers, the sighs, the soliloquy, all come from one and the same place, the heart! 'His eyes that once comforted her now bring grief.' - So sad! The sufferers only know how overwhelming this grief can be! 'Time slows as they pass each other on the crowded streets. A second of hope, they silently stare Drawn by an electric magnetism strong. Time returns and she can still feel the warmth of his breath run down her neck.' - This is so beautifully said, so poetic! 'Because it is the deepest depths of our souls Where there lives the strength of immortal love.' - These two lines are absolute gem, priceless! This was your first poem posted to this site, and the best one among the ones that I have read so far. Looking forward to have a look at some more of your works.

Amazing piece, Leah......you've put life in this piece. I could feel the sadness and love. Written with passion. Great......