Immortal Lines Comments

nice extended conceptual metaphor: ''The immortal lines are the proverbs known by all Wise sayings that has lived on through generations passed'' well written poem....10

The immortal lines are the proverbs known by all Wise sayings that has lived on through generations passed Very powerful expressions cheers with 10+++++++

excellent just flows like honey

A lot of depth to this piece my man...well composed write...flows like a cool breeze..............nice work Ron 10++

Lines to venerate us Lines to show our path Lines to liberate our love And connect us to our past A deep and moving poem about the forces at work that shape our truths. An excellent read