Immortal Idols Comments

like dust rushing on the feet....amazingly crafted....10/10

I love it. It made me tickled. Darling, I shall ask of you what I have of no other poet befor thee. Please, will you do me the honor of contacting me so that we ma collaborate in our poerty. Let us write a piece together! I would like to write on Immortality! No, our voices and nothing alike but in that I see beauti. Let me know. I'll give you my e-mail on a more privet page should you contact me through here. Chow Bella

Lovely read, Very well written

well done! I love this poem entirely. perfect :)

Its only Life, and in the end, no matter who we were...we are all the same...a return to where we were made. Powerful close-out places a poetic exclamation point on this pen-gem ~FjR~