Sunday, February 25, 2018

Immortal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fire thus;
and gun race;
bullet did not stop; but counting
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Mohammed Abideen Oluwalonsola
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Akhtar Jawad 07 April 2018

Shocked and became sad to read this poem, an impressive poem.

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Thank you poet. For everything that was is or will be. Well I wish to be a great poet like you

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Frank T Watkinson

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Frank T Watkinson 10 March 2018

Never got to know

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Thanks to those kind soul that comment here, whose lips kiss not, but use in prayer

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Maryam Shah 28 February 2018

Realy Interesting

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Scott Winkler 27 February 2018

fool killers...........

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Gambi ana 27 February 2018

such a lovely lyrics

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Uhm! time flies across my head, as my heart gallop

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Thez Alan 25 February 2018

This is an hidden truth about life and death

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Vivian 25 February 2018

Wow immortal it quite interesting

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Don Raph 25 February 2018

What a deadly soul

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Joy Okoro 25 February 2018

I guess shes a black magician

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