Saturday, June 13, 2020

Immoral Writings In Distinctive Style Comments

Rating: 4.4

When the mind is in wonder of chaos
The creation becomes pure insanity
Acquiring the gift of beauty in throes
In a decent dark artistic integrity
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COMMENTS
L MILTON HANKINS 04 September 2020

This poem, like many of this poet's, is dark and deep. Belga's flirtation with the occult and the mystical side is both interesting and challenging.

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Chinedu Dike 27 August 2020

An insightful rendition of words nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2020

It's a beautiful composition! Many congratulations! !

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks! and sorry for the late reply

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 June 2020

Genesis of creation, in general and that of a poem in particular., marvelously unfolded. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks a lot and sorry for the late reply

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2020

Straying into the darkest obsession To create is to wander in mind deep and far The fill become immoral in perfection. very fine poem indeed dear poet Andrew. tony

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks Dr Tony and sorry for the late reply

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Rajnish Manga 22 June 2020

To me it looks like a psychoanalytical study of a disturbed mind. Thanks a lot. And Congrats.

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thank you for reading and sorry for the late reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2020

Chaos! ! ! ! Insanity! With poetic justice to correct mankind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks Edward! sorry for the late late reply

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 June 2020

A surrealistic poem. Congratulations for the choice of Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. A most suitable drawing is added, bravo! That makes together one Perfect Surrealism in dark words. As I said here: BRAVO, POET!

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

sorry for the late late reply and thanks for the beautiful comment maám Sylvia really appreciate it

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 June 2020

Hard to understand....... Creative mind never can spend time lazily But sometimes creativity makes crazy to create new something; the hard time for the creator is here that if he can't do balance in creation and thoughtfulness dimensions then chaotic darkness damages all goodness of creative life; in that course of time creative one keeps following immorality.....

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks Mahtab I am really grateful reading it and sorry for the late reply

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Varsha M 22 June 2020

Dipped in the real poetic essence playing with words like a color from a painter's brush just giving the right stroke that makes it the masterpiece. Just splendid work. A worthy poetry for poem of the day.

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks Varsha for the wonderful comment and sorry for the very late reply

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 June 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Simply amazing. Congrats on your featured piece...10+++

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thank you sir Bernard I really appreciate the comment and sorry for the late late reply

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