Saturday, December 27, 2008

Immolation. Comments

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Immolate my love and burn it
sacrifice my fragility its weakness
forget true honesty lets forsake it
Its purity embittered no sweetness
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John Weber 30 December 2008

Painful passions provide powerful imagery on this one, Wade (excuse the alliteration) ! I enjoy the rhymes and pacing, and your articulation proves superlative. I look forward to enjoying more of your cannon over time! Warm regards, John.

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