Imminence Of Irrelevance Comments

''that encores the tunes of love infallibble like glazing tears dazzling over the lips of dusk.'' a really poem where the cognitive metaphors of love build a ''bridge'' between the happiness and unhappiness...a little 10++ for a great poem..

The assonance and consonance of this poem is smoothly soothing to the ear. The eye sees that love has never been in an irrelevant state, although said. Intriguing, Marvelous construction of lines, words. There are other things happening in this poem I just can't put a name to, yet. A reread is needed. Good. GOOD! xxElysabeth