Immersion In Sunshine Comments
The sunshine is sliding down
in vertical iridescent streams...
beautifying my senses,
illuming my mind:
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Wow- - -beautiful sunshine in this poem ! ! Thank you for sharing.
Vibrating light..... heartwarming poem... congrats on being chosen.....
Sunshine beautifully unfolds with it's shimmering splendour wrapping it's golden veil of beauty unleashed with uplifting dreams to grasp the moments and feel so good to be alive! Congratulations Mihaela on your outstanding poem being picked as poem of the day!
Wonderful enlightning poem about meditation..thank you...
This reminds me of more than one encounter I had with some rip-snortin'ly clean orange sunshine somewhere back on the space-time continuum. It was absofrigginlutely stupifying stuff, if I recall correctly. Fertilizing indeed. But it pulled out all the weeds.
Sunlight traveled some 90+ million miles to reach you and you welcomed it by absorbing it physically, transforming it metaphorically, and using it creatively. The first stanza describes the vivid physical sensations as your body absorbs the physical energy but in the second stanza something different is occuring. the spiritual impact of sunlight unites Earth and Heaven and the last two stanzas expand on this with the healing power in the third and the visionary uplift in the last. I felt a crescendo of human/solar interaction. Your poem cleanses the soul and then fills it with a new vision.
The most incomprehensibly time-bending and mind melting part of those photons journey to reach the surfaces of our bodies takes place in the very core of the sun. One would almost believe they never want to leave, and once they break the surface they flee the scene at the absolute fastest pace possible. And we're still left with the conundrum of dark matter which won't have anything to do with them.
a bright illuminating poem of the power that gives us life? ...............wonderfully written.
Wonderful poem to read as sunshine is pouring through the french windows.
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7/23/2025 1:13:37 PM # 1.0.0
I do hurry up to translate it, Mihaela.