Saturday, January 28, 2012

Immersion Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are two bricks at the bottom of the sea. We have no mouths we have no eyes.
The water hurts but we can't leave.
We are not rocks anymore, that was manufactured away. Both of us crushed, held together only by clay.
Drowning in a home that is now strange.
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Fiona Eris Strand
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Dave Walker 30 January 2012

Like this, an emotion packed poem. A great write.

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