Immersed In The Mystery Comments

very articulate and your piece is touching very heart thoughtful the mystery veiled this flight in root as the final destination they are mingled with mug of dark/ thanks Susan to share

Souls take flight... and like butterflies... land in God's palm

A very thoughtful and heartfelt plea for peace and a resolution to this mystery. Lovely poem Susan.

Thanks for this poem. Very thoughtful and compassionate.10/10. 'Where has the time taken you Far from eyes that want To watch you sleep Safe in the arms of home' - Kind feelings, I appreciate. 'That God alone knows Without need of radar How to track your soul And how to cradle our cares In despair' - Indeed! The thought is beautiful. 'Immersed in the mystery Bird falling from the skies' - True, well said!