Immense Love: Lotus Poem by me poet yeps poet

Immense Love: Lotus

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You bring tears
in my eyes
I seldom cry
but now you help me
wash my eyes

tears of joy are like Amrit (Nectar)
all love to taste it
you and I

when we go to Churches and Mandirs /temples
we taste liquid pure /milk/water
it redeems
doesn't it

so do your words also
I feel are the charms
of poetry
of poets like all of thee
who openly love
my anonymity
and sincerity
so I must
BOW
to all thee

Poet me bows

Friday, November 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,poetry,appreciation,greatness,love,love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
NOTES
One man/POET
tried to make my presence sullen
But he helped me
in getting so many friends and accolades
Hope he too amends

I will still accept him
with open hands
come into my arms
This is a call from heavens
ATMA OR SOUL OR ATOM

Just try and be rational
and human
life is short and can be counted in
FINGERS by the dozen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 02 November 2018

A great message... Life is short but of thousands miles.....10 Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 November 2018

beautiful IMAGERY You seem to be a very seasoned lady thanks keep reading the LOTUS IS A RARE FIND VERY FEW DO LIKE GAUTAMA BUDDHA

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