Sunday, April 29, 2018

Immeasurable Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your dream is existent.
It is a galactic spin;
it is electric, rhythmic,
resonant, and lunar,
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Perdita Young 05 May 2018

The more we understand God, the more He reveals Himself. We thirst for those heights with a will of being children. - A very philosophical poem, with very impressive lines. Thought-provoking.Thanks for sharing. Perdita

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Susan Williams 30 April 2018

The more we understand God, / the more He reveals Himself.- - - ] A wonderful truth! And where else can we look and see eternity but in the heavens, home of stars and suns and planets and comets! ! ! Delightful! 10+++++++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 April 2018

Wow sublime philosophical muse poem. I admire the references to the moon, so poetic and apt. The last stanza mentioning God is my favourite. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, dark skinned or fair skinned. I would love to have your views about it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2018

A powerful write intelligently penned. The first and penultimate stanzas are so striking that conveys wonderful messages.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

Like a galactic spin dream swims and motivates ind. We all have rights to think. Mind thinks about eternity. We all are children of God and we feel the thirst for getting him. This poem is an amazing and excellent poem,

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