Tuesday, May 29, 2018

Immature Humanity! Comments

Rating: 4.8

All I stand still here, but on the nib of death
Youth are dished up brutally and bathed under the thunder
Stormy day and night fucks us lovingly
And we become pregnant in immature humanity!
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Adeeb Alfateh 14 February 2021

Sometimes humanity takes birh in the embryo of brutality!

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Britte Ninad 09 August 2018

So interesting Title - Immature Humanity! Strong writing

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Riza Braholli 28 June 2018

Hi poet. it hurts to the bone but is bitter truth...

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2018

The animal has yet to become a human, a bitter truth so effectively penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 June 2018

A timely poem on violence and heinous crimes. An insightful piece of work. So poignant.10

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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2018

A poignant piece of poetry depicting man inhumanity to man. Well thought out and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Mahtab.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 May 2018

you seem to be a love poet the night you say read me then come over and share romantic poetry o boy

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Muzahidul Reza 30 May 2018

Yet you lotd immature, but this immature humanity is sinking in sins; but i see zero humanity in human world, ........ ........... great write

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

excellent penned on the scenery brutality nice 10+++

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Lyn Paul 29 May 2018

Shocking, but so real. How can this be happening? It is brutal.

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Tom Allport 29 May 2018

a poem with a message of stop and take a good look at what benefit being in a collective really entails? ...…..well penned

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