Immaculate Consciousness Comments

I grasp their emotions in my solar plexus, as a current of life spreading throughout my being whishing to materialise it; as love formed from vision, as a slightly touch of hand...or...lips... a kiss...a key...unlocking the portal of unconsciousness: .....touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

.................but it functions, as the aquatic currents of consciousness, fluctuating in a continuous vibration; I choose, and I shape my wishes: impalpable, but most substantial; as images in a dream which shape reality; Profoundly beautiful is the adjective I like to use here! Catchy images and an outstanding metaphor! As Dillip has rightly put it..... this is a clinical dissection of a poet's psyche......! ! Top marks!

An amazing piece of work! I find a clinical dissemination of a poetic psyche! Adorable piece..immaculate expression! The last four lines make your poem elegant! Appreciated! ! !